In my lifetime I have lost a lot of beautiful individuals
I hope your watching down waiting on my arrival People that I love more than life itself
You taught me the importance of believing in oneself Most of you are the reason why I try to be the best at what I do
So I don’t just half ass anything I do it in remembrance of you
Now that your gone sometimes all the motivation is gone
But in my dreams I hear you telling me to keep willing on
So I look up to the heavens and ask for their help
Within seconds your presence is what I felt
A Disney movie that I watched a longtime ago said ” The past Kings are always looking down and watching over me”
So every now and again I look up to you for answers and for you to still be close to me
Sometimes I feel like I just wont make it to see my Birthday
Please give me a chance to shake up the world like and earthquake
Now I’m just begging that you give me a sign that will finally set me free
So I can eventually see love, pain, art, and soul in some art of beauty
Dream of Angels but live amongst all kinds of demons
I want to give up but I have no reason
So like a growing tree I will keep getting taller with this poetry
When you read what I write it will symbolize all the greats from the past
I promise to keep your name going and your legacy will never die fast
In a dream you told me to come see and pay my respects
So from this day on I will leave a Rose on your grave and show that my roots are what I will never forget…..
Powerful and wonderfully articulated.
"...like a growing tree I will keep getting taller with this poetry" ...
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"...Dream of Angels but live amongst all kinds of demons"
the last 3 lines...( & the beautiful Ebony Rose)
I love the above Words & the sentiments you express. Thanks for sharing with me - you make me *feel,* which I believe is the best an Artist can do! We paint pictures with Words, photos of feelings & ideas, even...When a Reader relates, because of your Word choice,syntax, cadence, I feel you are successful! Keep Writing! PeaceLoveSmiles, CherylFaith
I thought I was already following you! Sorry about that! I am now! & please excuse that I miss so much of your work - I have many changes happening in my Life at the Moment - I am offline most of the time, unfortunately...but I hope to be able to read you more. Please visit my Online Poetry Workshop (most of my Poetry is not online) Soon I will move my work to a new online home...Please feel free to follow/comment (no obligation, of course!)
<3 CherylFaith
Powerful emotional poetry!
Blackprint Poet
"Please give me a chance to shake up the world like and earthquake
Now I’m just begging that you give me a sign that will finally set me free
So I can eventually see love, pain, art, and soul in some art of beauty
Dream of Angels but live amongst all kinds of demons" I just love this sentiment beautiful the desire to live fully, passionately. Powerful! Amazingly done
amazing expression.wow.
you rock!
Your work here is certainly free. I feel your connection to those you've lost and the need to keep the connections and record them. Thank you. Gay
My friend, my life is a better one because you share your poetry with me. Thank you. Keep writing from that good heart of yours...
fantastic works you have here.The power of expression.Keep the good work going.Hope u good.I just dropped another bomb of a poem on my blog so come check it out, comment and share with friends.Good day.
this poem break the heart of the readers,....mean you are inspiring poet!!!!