We fight all all day, we fight at night where is this going to take us
Love is a very strong word but how strong is the word trust
Longer we stay together, we begin to change with the season
Or love as to be stronger whether you like it or not that's my reason
I call you names when I'm mad just to get under your skin
We drop bombs on each other when the real love lies within
You take me to a place where I've never been before
I hate to see when I have you crying on the floor
My intentions aren't to hurt you, I want to show you that I love you more
Give you place to stay so you don't have to worry about this storm
Sooner or later it will pass and I will be here to keep you warm
Promise everything will be OK so please don't be alarm
Our love is great and I will never say it's perfect
Let's find the flaws together so in our future we can correct it
We must learn to stop using these weapons to hurt each other
Be strong and come together as a couple and help one another
I always say I love you but then we're back at the bullshit
Staying up all night arguing about something so stupid
Is this real love I'm sorry that I can't take this
When my heart starts to run away, you always seem to chase it
I know that your made for me, you know my strengths and my weakness
When ever I seem to hurt you my heart is at its weakest
Together I know that we can be stronger individuals
Someone told me that new love is so cute, but with time it can be beautiful
I just want peace with you, not trying to share a piece of you and I promise never to say peace to you
So I ask....
why we gotta argue, why we gotta fight
I just wanna love you, I wanna make it right
It's like we both forgot what we were fighting for
So tell me why are we at war?
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday
Love it!! #Realish
I think the very ending would make a fine lyric for a song.
Prose poetry, you do this so well Ace. Hope they kiss and make up
This is poem ace it all.. excellent expression on describing what often takes place among couples... Great Write.. :)
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aww! i love this...
yessss!!!!!! love it!
In Italy we use to say “l’amore non è bello se non è litigarello” that means “love is not beautiful without arguing (a bit)” so well… I don’t know. I should say “make love and not war”, but also after an argument is always nice to “make up”! :-)
Lovely poem! Really!
powerful..
A++
hey, sorry i've been away for a while!
as always, magnificient poetry, it's always a pleasure to stop by your blog
hope to hear from you soon!
Ace, this is such a moving piece.
I also nominated you for the Versatile Blogger award. You can pick up the award at the following link : http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/15/the-versatile-blogger-award/
With warmest regards,
JP
I'm thinking the end has a rap cadence.
Powerful statement about love and getting to that past cute stage without "killing" each other
excellent
thanks for sharing with One Shot
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those in love often find themselves in battle...as you state it is when we forget what we are fighting for that it becomes deadly...
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Love is war...the age old adage, and I think your piece is an excellent statement to that. The more we love, the better we know, and the better we are able to get under that skin. Really enjoyed this, and thanks much for stopping by my place as well :)
This is a good strong write...I like .
Powerful story. Particularly like the last verse, agree it could be a song.