Secrecy


posted by acebiggaveli

11 comments



I have feelings for Her but have no idea how to show it
For she has man and I have a girl but no is suppose to know it

Secrecy

I have fantasized about the mere thought of my kissing her lips
Looking deep into her eyes and making one wish

Secrecy

My heart beats and rumbles in my body like a train on a track
This feeling is because I know her heart is doing the same and that's a fact

Secrecy

But like always there is a problem with us being together
For I am with someone and she is with another

Secrecy

I wonder is she thinks about me at night
About simple or complex things that couldn't be brought to light

Secrecy

Will I ever get to share and actual moment with her without anyone knowing
To be in a room with her for just a few seconds enjoying some love making

Secrecy

When I look into her eyes I know what she wants to do
I know she can see that I want to do it to

Secrecy

Maybe one day she will take me up on that offer
Maybe one day we will share secrets of things we want to do with each other

Secrecy

Everyone has secrets that they would want to share with a certain someone
Could be about anything but it is something that you can't tell your love one

Secrecy



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11 comments

  1. emmett wheatfall
    March 30, 2011 at 9:45 PM
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    Oh my, this is beautiful. The way it is written, its form, style, and subtle yet overt message. A very powerful poem. This is just plain good. A great write.

  2. Beachanny
    March 30, 2011 at 10:38 PM
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    Phone poems...phone sex...excitement..rendezvouz of words...turning in the cyberwind and blowing my way. Wondrous.

  3. Unknown
    March 31, 2011 at 12:23 AM
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    Ackeem - thanks for inviting me to read
    very inviting and alluring piece
    like a song that no one can hear
    Nice to meet you as well on One Stop

  4. Brian Miller
    March 31, 2011 at 7:04 AM
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    very nicely done...great set up...and yes we all have secrets and in many ways they define us...nice one shot.

  5. Curly
    March 31, 2011 at 2:26 PM
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    beautiful... it makes you want to shout GO ON TELL HER! But that's probably the beauty of it... the dream of having her...
    I love it!

  6. Marshy
    March 31, 2011 at 5:32 PM
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    this was very well done...very clever share..thanks pete

  7. Katherine Krige
    April 1, 2011 at 11:17 AM
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    Secrecy
    something we admit only to ourselves
    something you should perhaps look at deeper in your soul
    Secrecy
    beware the pang of it...

  8. william manson
    April 2, 2011 at 6:27 PM
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    another winner, ace, superb :)

  9. Anonymous
    April 3, 2011 at 9:58 PM
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    oh my, oh my... this is truly beautiful and sweet :)

  10. Marcia M
    April 4, 2011 at 2:34 PM
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    A beautiful piece. Really enjoy the read.

  11. The Poet
    April 7, 2011 at 8:07 PM
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    Nice imagery for this one.

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