It feels terrible that the love that was once there as finally faded away
We have been through so many ups and downs but this is finally the day
I have finally got you out of my life and now it's time to live it
It took me long enough to realize that I was being foolish
All my friends are proud that I have opened up my eyes
Because this whole time all you were doing was making me cry inside
You had such a control over me, and can't believe that I let that all happen
Can't believe I let you take me to a point where my heart as been broken
The love I had for you was stronger that any drug
In the begin you made feel like I was dancing the jitterbug
You believed that all this time you could walk all over me
If you really loved me still seems to be a mystery
Now that I'm not on your side you want to send me a few letters
But now I'm becoming a woman so I need to treat myself better
Sorry, ACE BUT THE LOVE HAS FADED
You turn into a ghost right in front of my eyes
Slow but surely you ripped up my inside
As I write this I can't help to cry and that shows that I'm vulnerable
But I don't need you because I know true love is achievable
Now that I opened up my eyes today it's to late because you have faded away
So go on and be gone because I have moved on to something special
I know now that being with you was accidental
You will one day realize what you could have had in me
Nothing you write shows me any sympathy
So please I beg you to just leave me alone
For right now that's the way I belong
ACE you have...
FADED
"But now I'm becoming a woman so I need to treat myself better
Sorry, ACE BUT THE LOVE HAS FADED"
I got the jest of what this mean't, but I had to read it a couple of times. Is was what she put in the letter, right?
If so, put in something that let's your audience know, because for a minute I was like, I thought ACE was a guy...
Other than that, that was a good expression of events that lead to you ending things for good in that relationship.
this is tough ... i completely undertsand the poem.. i liek thiss
i really like this,
I agree on some level with Trayvia about getting a slight bit lost in this, but as I read over again, I see this interesting view taking place, where the reader also knows the placement of the writer, and understands it...maybe I'm wrong but it seems as such to me. ~ Like an "alter ego" writing to the other half about all the wrong of self-doing....interesting writing and quite enjoyed the ways this really could be looked at. ~April
This is PoetTruth89 from twitter... once again you keep on writing awesome ish.,.... appreciate it
intriguing write for sure...i enjoyed it.
An interesting telling of the journey to the moment when we gather the strength to walk away. I liked the power of this "You turn into a ghost right in front of my eyes". Thanks for sending me a link.
the love has faded, you have faded - hard words - made me shiver..