I won't my baby girl back
This bed is so cold, as I lay here wondering where she is at
The sheets smell like her love spell fragrance from Victoria secrets
I need her warm lips to caress and tell her about the love I always wanted to admit
Somebody tell me what to do so I can get her back to where she needs to be
In my arms, close to my heart so I can whisper in her ear "I'm sorry"
I want the chance to feel you but not so sexually
All I want is her warm to be back next to me
If you see her tell her that I need her and how much I love her
Tell her about all the letters a wrote and titled the Your Secret Admirer
This bed as not ever been the same
It so cold feels like knives stabbing you I don't know how long I can take this pain
Can someone please tell her that I feel so alone?
Can someone tell her that she needs to come back home?
When she isn't here I have a severe case of insomnia
I feel so addicted to you, feels like nymphomania
I want a chance to know everything about you from the neck up
I want you to finally be there person that you trust
I hate being so cold, I just want to be warm with you
If you let me INDULGE in your mere presence, I know
that you will realize that I love you
love it man...keep up the good work
awwww boo! Thats sweet!! I'll keep u warm!!!
I fucks with it kid..
Intense, sweet. Thanks
great poem! i really enjoyed it
your blog title is a contradiction to you wanting feedback. My honest opinion, edit your work before you post it. and the harsh photo doesn't match the fragile love feel of the poem at all. the photo's lookin alot more Baudelaire and your poem reads borderline lyrical attempt
I have to tell you that this is a very good poem. You really have talent. All i ask is that you watch the spelling errors unless thats how its supposed to go. Other than that, you got mad skillz. Check out my website and keep in touch. www.jaleesamceachin.com