what s good yall havent wrote nothin in awhile and this girl request me write about sex after the club..
what ever you want me to write jus tell me and i will do my best and make them with the best of my abillities
After the club I headed to the crib.
It is 4 o'clock in morning so i called her over
before she got there I made sure i set the music in the room
first song I played was WHY I LOVE YOU
The door bell rung and i knew it was my boo
As we walked up the stairs to my room I can hear the lyrics SWEET LADY
I looked her in the eyes and said I miss my baby
Soon as i looked in her hazel eyes
I hear the song I can READ YOUR MIND
She is so beautiful and I couldnt think of nothing above
The track that played was signs of love
As i take off her clothes
All I can hear is your SO BEAUTIFUL
She whispered in my ear saying all I want is you
As I buried myself inside her
Playing next is ARE WE IN THIS TOGETHER
As I dug deeper and deeper she called me daddy
I stretched over and changed the song to NOBODY
When PURPLE KISSES was blasting in the air
I slowly run my tongue up and down her spine
and I licked something most people wouldnt dare
As she was shouting my name
If she dont get on me, my life is an EMPTY FRAME
When I hit it from the back I say YOU BELONG TO ME
As she sees her climax after climax she screams out your all I see..
This is just a preview of how I MAKE LOVE IN THE CLUB
posted by acebiggaveli
Hey Ackeem,
So...nice and poetic. No disrespect to you and your girl, but really, "sexy" would have been you picking her up at 4AM instead of calling her over and maybe letting her stroke you all the way back to the house. Then treating her to all your wonderful(ness) once you made it inside.
But glad you had a good time though, that's what it's all about, right?
Very sexy poem! The mention of different slow jams in the mix of your sensual wordplay was awesome :-)